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many poems have trangressed the hearts of others as it normally found in proverbs as it

as that it as touched bye many and also it shows the gifted

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Recreation by Faith 2 Replies

Started by Sindiso Singwango. Last reply by Serville Dec 14, 2012.

The Power Of Jesus 1 Reply

Started by Celiena Pierre. Last reply by Serville Dec 14, 2012.

Love Without Sparks 1 Reply

Started by Kayla Nicole Parker. Last reply by Serville Dec 14, 2012.

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Comment by Mel Vyn on May 5, 2015 at 6:05am

When Jesus was nailed to the cross,
When His hand and feet nailed 
When His bone is crushed
At that time, Jesus felt the mighty
pain of sin.

The sin of the world
Jesus felt a helpless feeling
He felt a heartbroken
He felt a dark world
is covering the earth
is deceiving his people
and devastating feeling

Jesus was utterly 
heartbroken and
Jesus was utterly
sad and was
utterly felt the 
pain has wrought

IN Everything He did, 
He said Father, Father
why have you forsaken
Satan laughed
Devil laughed
evil angel laughed
"Where is His Father"
"Where is the Angel"

the Darkness approaching
the Earthquake approaching
His head and His eye 
is moving upward to heaven
and His death is approaching
HIs victory is won 
His victory is won 
It is finished
It is finished
It is finished
The sound goes to the earth
The sound goes to the heaven
The sound goes to the satan
The angelic host is rejoicing
NO!!!!!!!! Satan said 
He lost and He had been
sentenced and everything
He could do is gone 
He looks at His hand and His own self
He Died.

The victory is won 
The victory is won 
On the Third day 
Satan and His angel 
guard in front of His stone
They guard Him to come out
He cannot arise
For they will died
When the angelic host
come to the earth 
The light descended from 
the earth, Satan and His angel
saw and down they go

Jesus Jesus Jesus 
time to wake up......
Your victory is won 
Satan is doomed forever...

Dear Friend, the gift is 
through His death.
Take it
Believe in Him 
He is our example
He is our Savior

Comment by Amelia on October 16, 2014 at 8:41pm

La amistad es amor

La amistad es amor en serenos estados;

los amigos se hablan, cuando están más callados.

Si el silencio interrumpo, el amigo responde

mi propio pensamiento, que también él esconde.

Si él comienza, prosigo el curso de su idea;

ninguno de nosotros la formula ni la crea.

Sentimos que hay un algo superior que nos guía,

y logra la unidad de nuestra compañía.

Y nos vemos llevados a pensar con hondura,

y a lograr certidumbre en la vida insegura;

y sabemos que encima de nuestras apariencias,

se adivina un saber, mas allá de las ciencias.

Y por eso yo busco tener a mi lado

el amigo que entiende cuanto digo callado.

Author: Pedro Prado

Comment by Celiena Pierre on June 9, 2013 at 5:10pm

Don’t Tell Lies


Don’t tell lies my friend for it gets you no where,

It comes like you are living a false life in fear.


Telling lies is a risky thing it can get you in trouble,

Believe what I say it can surely make your life crumble.


If you want to gain trust from anyone don’t tell lies,

For the little trust they may have in you surely dies.


Don’t tell lies if you want to reach your dreams or gold,

You may end up living a story book life that may never unfold.


Why tell, or live a lie to be a known or popular person in life?

Instead you can become to someone a truthful husband or wife.


Remember each time you tell a lie it is recorded in heaven,

So change your heart tell the truth and ask to be forgiven.


Don’t wait before it’s too late to stop telling lies my friend,

 God is an honest God and he wants us to be truthful till the end. 


Written By: Celiena S.C.Pierre

Comment by Celiena Pierre on June 3, 2013 at 3:19pm


Drugs is not cool, most times it starts in School.

There you are being and feeling peer pressured,

By a friend who thinks drugs should be treasured.

It can be alcohol, cocaine, or weed that can make you high

But they will say “it takes away all trouble” which is a lie.


Drugs even begins at home, parents drinking and smoking

You think it’s not wrong and does it without thinking.

Even when adults are in a time of stress and greatly troubled,

                     They choose drugs for the way out but their trials are just doubled.                    


Don’t get addicted to any kind of drugs my friend,

For this I know it shall bring your life close to an end.

Drugs will only bring you melancholy and sickness,

It will surely lead you into a life of anguish and bitterness.


You should know that your body is a temple of God,

Never renounce it and decide to devastate it at all.

God gave us a pure body that we may worship him,

So we need to keep it in order, righteous and out of sin.


Let us be free from drugs and addicted to Christ,

Always remember he is the one who came and paid our price.

The price for us to be free, saved and a choice for life of eternity,

Allow your body to be rapt and tied up with Jesus and gain prosperity.

Comment by Lenith Tercepona on May 8, 2013 at 6:49pm



                                Let me not to the marriage of true minds

Admit impediments. Love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to remove:
O no! it is an ever-fixed mark
That looks on tempests and is never shaken;
It is the star to every wandering bark,
Whose worth's unknown, although his height be taken.
Love's not Time's fool, though rosy lips and cheeks
Within his bending sickle's compass come:
Love alters not with his brief hours and weeks,
But bears it out even to the edge of doom.
If this be error and upon me proved,
I never writ, nor no man ever loved.

  By: William Shakespeare

Comment by darren dubberley on July 26, 2012 at 1:08pm

when you smile you found happiness

when you shine you found the light of the Lord

when you are blessed you found a friend

when you are no longer stressed you are relaxed


when ever u need to be happy find happiness

 when you looking for love find something to be loved

when you are looking for kindness find a kind thing to say

when you are looking for the Lord just pray


and there u find a answer and there he will display is love and affection to is children


Comment by Genevieve Taniongon on April 1, 2012 at 9:19pm


Comment by Serville on April 1, 2012 at 6:10pm

hi hi lyn

Comment by Sarah Sulton on March 31, 2012 at 5:40pm

Comment by Serville on March 31, 2012 at 12:08pm

Ring, ring, ring someone please answer the phone

it might jus be your clone

so many times

and in so many rhymes

he keeps calling out to you

there is a job to be done

a job to go out on the field and represent him by making others wise

yes he is callling you

you may ask why me?

but jus relax he never makes a mistake

so no need to be a fake.

yes he is calling you

so you need to answer before it is too late

and then you will want to hate

so dont run from his calling

because you may end up falling

and then you will be calling

and definitely want him to answer

so relax and answer his call and put him on loud speaker

because he is definitely a keeper.

so don't ever ignore the Lord's calling.

written by serville


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